I started this blog to give myself the opportunity to practice writing. The goal was to write four stories a week. I have really enjoyed the creative outlet. Now, I have invited some friends to also contribute stories and artwork. The author is identified at the end of the piece. All (most) of the writing takes the phrase "once we were lovers" as inspiration. Critical feedback is welcome.

Monday, September 1, 2008

Love Revolutionary

Who falls in love?

I do!

Me too!

Who among us has been hurt?

Me!

Twice.

Ten times.

Who here has hurt?

I didn't mean to do it.

She was asking for it.

A little bit.

Who here will join my Love Revolution?

What?

Revolution?

A revolution of true hearts to vanquish misunderstanding and banish pain!

Oh.

Well, that seems like a tall order.

Who's with me?

Listen buddy, do you think this is San Francisco?

My people, my people. You have to take hold of love before love takes hold of you. Are you fighters for love or proponents of pain?

...

I'll conquer you all.

2 comments:

N said...

I liked the original ending better :)

malcoJOJO said...

I dig this. Nice format!
Fun piece.